Although I wrote this poem in January, I think I’m about done revising it. For a tiny poem, it’s been through 11 drafts, and I think I’ve given up. It’s as good as it’s going to get. Feel free to make suggestions though!
My shoulder muscles tense,
instinctive reaction to a
I’m not okay.
My fight or flight response
a bone-deep warning to
avoid sudden movements.
I’ve got a few poems jotted down that need a second (or twelfth) look before they’re ready to share, but this one is unlikely to become any more than it is, so I’m just throwing it out there.
I was sitting in a rattan egg chair (I think they’re called egg chairs? Like a little cave of a chair, suspended from the ceiling? Anyway, moving on) on the porch/verandah/deck at my in-laws’ this afternoon, and as I half dozed in the sun, wondering if I should start a new book or if my husband and my mother-in-law were serious that work would only take ‘fifteen to twenty minutes’, my eyes were drawn to the patterns in the chair. And ta da, a poem was born. *shrugs* It’s not great, but I feel like there are a couple of people who followed me when I was posting poems every day and I’ve neglected them lately. This poem isn’t probably the best way to indulge them, but oh well. I do have a few more on the way, but I think they have potential to be stronger, so I’ll hold on to them for a little bit.
The rattan is woven around the sides
in such a way as to make
and the borders
are encircled with bands
that give a sense of
Prompt: Use personification and alliteration.
Prompt: Write a poem involving an emotional reaction to some event that seems to be about something else. Talk around your strong feelings; don’t declare them directly.
As I complete my plummet
from the cliff edge,
the water welcomes me
in a cool,
Smatters of salted sunlight
grapple with the murk,
as I close my eyes and
Prompt: Winter is here and you are now trapped.
The paddocks were sodden,
each hoof print a puddle that
rippled and overflowed with every
driblet of water that fell from stony skies.
The excess swept over the grass,
blades bent beneath the heavy weight,
and slowly the water forged a path
down the hill.
A deluge the colour of clay,
with the unmistakeable fragrance of
cow shit and mud,
poured across the gravel road
just below Prior’s farm
in a rush to reach the swollen creek
which had long breached its banks.
Avid eyes and bright smiles watched
from the safety of the farmhouse windows,
because we knew the school bus
would never get through.
And Mum worried about practical things
as Dad shifted stock to higher grounds,
but at least the water tank was full.
Prompt: If you knew your muse, what would he/she look like?
She insists her favourite colour is white,
but speaks not of purity,
and pristine immaculateness,
but of possibilities and
the never-ceasing search
for fulfillment which lies
always in the next project.
My feet ached in blue suede heels
I’d bought on sale at Westgate,
but I was distracted by the way
the evening sun caught the Auckland skyline
as I drove over the causeway.
Yep, this is another poem recorded while driving home. See, I told you I am more inspired when driving than any other time! Ha ha!
I wish I could have taken a photo for you, as the Auckland skyline really did look amazing in the evening sunlight. There’s a spot when you’re driving along the Northwestern Motorway, just as you go over the causeway, where the Auckland Harbour Bridge lines up perfectly with the Auckland city skyline. Unfortunately, there’s nowhere safe to stop and take photos, so instead, you just have to take my word for it. 🙂
I finally had a chance to type up the poem I recorded on my phone last month while driving home from work. 🙂
If you squinted hard enough,
and used the generosity of spirit
required for the earnest appraisal
of a child’s fingerpainting,
the clouds painted feathery angel wings
across the sky.
I was too busy focussing
weary eyes on endless streams
of sparsely decorated tarseal